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個人陳述格式及個人陳述范文模板

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導讀:個人陳述在申請過程中發揮的作用不言而喻,如果學校沒有面試環節,你的個人陳述就成了招生考官唯一可以了解你對專業學科的熱情及能力的材料。如果有面試環節,個人陳述中寫的內容也往往成為面試官提問的重點。那么個人陳述格式是怎樣的呢?范文模板是怎么寫出來的呢?本文致遠教育小編帶大家一探究竟。

個人陳述在申請過程中發揮的作用不言而喻,如果學校沒有面試環節,你的個人陳述就成了招生考官唯一可以了解你對專業學科的熱情及能力的材料。如果有面試環節,個人陳述中寫的內容也往往成為面試官提問的重點。那么個人陳述格式是怎樣的呢?范文模板是怎么寫出來的呢?本文致遠教育小編帶大家一探究竟。

個人陳述寫作

個人陳述寫作很主觀,有很多種寫法;確保包含自己學術、實踐、科研、獎項、海外經歷等背景,以及自己的規劃、目標,申請動機就是合格的。學校、專業以及申請程序的不同,往往PS側重點也不同;但一般情況下,個人陳述格式結構順序是:

·開頭 

第一段:申請這個專業的原因

·主體

第二段:學術背景和學術成就

第三、四段:課外活動或實習或工作經驗

·結尾

第五段:職業規劃以及再次申明為什么選擇這個學校、這個項目,以及這個項目對你職業規劃的幫助

學術及實踐的經歷因人而異,根據每個人的具體背景來決定,劃分段落也是如此。

除了根據具體背景劃分段落之外,也要時刻區分抄別人的文章(死套模板)和遵循框架結構的區別,前者做了是抄襲,直接淘汰,后者不做是偏題,也是淘汰。

很多人寫PS都想創新,不按照這個框架結構來寫,但結果往往是PS不符合邏輯或者是一點都不令人信服;創新本身就是一種賭博,你賭對方會喜歡你這樣的寫法,但大多數的結果都不如人意,所以最穩妥的方式就是按照框架結構來發揮。當然了,那些極具創新天賦的寫手就除外了。

對于大多數人來說,寫PS要做的創新是在提綱的框架內而不是框架外,上述的結構順序就類似一個框架結構;學校是希望了解你這方面的背景信息,如果你不這么寫,非得去講故事,學??赐炅斯适?,感動了,但是完全沒有任何需要收下你的意思,這就本末倒置了。這些PS的框架結構也是大學自己所給出的要求,這些提綱就是他們想要了解關于你的內容。

一定記住如果你不是學莎士比亞文學或者你不是超級好的英文寫作者,那么 Be professional. That's enough.

個人陳述寫作五大具體步驟

個人陳述寫作五大具體步驟

接下來將結合美國埃默里大學的提綱框架來具體闡述一下寫個人陳述寫作步驟以及細節內容。個人陳述寫作過程以及內容因人而異,但這些步驟可以更好地指導你如何寫自己的個人陳述。

(一)Step 1: Reflect 

根據自己之前的經歷來尋找寫作靈感,與此同時重新思考你申請這個專業的動機或初衷,然后結合以下的一些問題來引導思考,并記錄具體的思考內容:

motivation

  1. Why are you applying?
  2. What inspires you to pursue this profession?
  3. What makes you so passionate about this?

Fit:

  1. What are your values?
  2. How do these align with the values of the profession?
  3. What personal qualities do you have that will enable you to positively contribute to the profession?

Capacity:

  1. What are your most defining experiences?
  2. what competencies did you develop through these experiences?
  3. What errors or regrets have taught you something about yourself?
  4. How have you changed/grown from your experiences?

Vision:

  1. What do you want to do and be (professionally speaking)?
  2. What impact do you want to have?

(二)Step 2: Brainstorm

思考你的中心思想是什么;閱讀個人陳述問題 / 提示,利用之前的筆記進行分組,尋找一些新的主題;時刻記住你的個人陳述想要向招生考官傳達什么樣的內容。

Possible Topics:

1.你有哪些豐富多彩 / 獨特的經歷或事情,它如何塑造你?

2.你所扮演的角色及其對你的挑戰?

3.運動員: 你們的紀律和團隊精神是如何塑造你的?

4.出國留學: 多樣性的事物和全球視角是怎么影響你的人生觀?

5.演員 / 藝術家 / 音樂家: 你的專注、自律/ 創造力對你有什么影響?

6.志愿者: 你是怎么分配自己的時間、怎么去幫助別人、怎么去實現自己的價值?

(三)Step 3: Execution

一旦有一個好的想法,好的中心思想,就可以開始動筆了。開頭要和論點互相照應;以大綱來確保你的論點和段落不會偏題。

1)Essay Outline:

1.Introduction (Motivation): Initial inspiration, provides context

2.Body : Fit and Capacity, Action/Experiences, Change

3.Conclusion (Vision): Future goals, What impact do you want to have

2)Paragraph Outline:

1.Point (Introduction to the main point of the paragraph), 

2.Evidence

3.Explanation of how/why it is relevant to the profession

4.Link (transition to next paragraph)

* 并非所有段落都要按照大綱的確切順序排列,但大綱的所有因素都應列在每一類別中。

(四)Step 4: Take a break!

完成你的最終稿件后,冷靜下來,稍作調整,再用全新的眼光和視角來看待它。

(五)Step 5: Editing and Proofing

再次仔細閱讀個人陳述的具體內容,逐行分析;在閱讀的時候,問問自己這篇文章是否適用于其他專業,如果是可以通用的話,那證明內容還不夠具體。內容上是否缺少什么,哪部分起作用 / 不起作用,信息清晰、明確嗎?

尋找靠譜專業的校對者;在他們讀完你的個人陳述之后,問問他們你的中心思想是什么,如果他們的解釋與你想表達的意圖不同,那么可能這篇陳述還不夠清楚。與此同時,要對他們的建議持開放態度,但也要保持自己的真實想法。

個人陳述寫作建議

個人陳述寫作建議

寫一篇個人陳述不是一兩天就可以完成的,需要提早準備、搜集積累素材、多次修改、語法檢查、拼寫檢查等。以下是是知名普渡OWL關于PS的一些tips:

 (一)Answer the questions that are asked

如果你申請了幾所學校,你可能會發現每份申請中的問題都有些相似。但是不要試圖在個人陳述中使用相同的語句;在任何情況下,都要確保你的回答準確地符合問題。

 (二)Tell a story

生硬的經驗模板常常會讓招生考官無感甚至厭煩;但如果你的陳述內容是新穎的、生動形象的、與眾不同的,那你的機會將會大大提高。

 (三)Be specific

個人陳述應該是具體的;例如你渴望成為一名律師/工程師/或任何一個職業,這應該是你在陳述中描述特定經歷之后的結果。目標應該作為故事的邏輯結論出現,而不是張口就來的假大空。

 (四)Find an angle

如果你的內容缺乏故事性,那么想辦法讓它變得有吸引力就很有必要;可以從一個新穎的、有趣的角度去開始構思故事內容。

 (五)Concentrate on your opening paragraph

導語或開頭段落通常是最重要的,既可以抓住讀者的注意力,也可以作為其余部分的框架。

 (六)Tell what you know

個人陳述的主體部分就是詳細說明你在特定領域的興趣、經歷經驗、背景能力。

如果你對該專業領域的了解較少;可以從課外活動、實習、工作經驗、學術背景和學術成就等具體內容來闡述你對該專業領域的認知。

盡可能具體地講述你所知道的關于這個領域的知識,并使用較專業的語言來傳達這些信息。因為陳述中包含的內容,通常是招生考官衡量、考核學生的一個指標。

 (七)Don't include some subjects

有些事情最好不要寫在個人陳述里。例如,參考高中或小時候的經歷;也不要提及潛在的、有爭議的話題(比如宗教或政治問題)。

 (八)Do some research, if needed

招生考官可能會問你為什么申請這一所學校?

所以申請之前先做一些研究調查,找出是什么原因吸引你去申請這個大學;如果是學校的文化/環境將會給你帶來重要的影響,這就是一個值得一提的因素。

 (九)Write well and correctly

牢記字數限制、語法檢查、拼寫檢查、并仔細校對你的文章。許多招生官說,良好的書面技能和正確使用語言的篇幅會更有利;因為這樣他們可以更方便、快捷地去了解和考核一個學生。

 (十)Avoid clichés

假設你想申請關于醫學院的專業,卻在個人陳述中寫你擅長科學并且想幫助別人,這就沒有很好的貼合你的主題和中心思想;還有,不要經常重復或者是用陳詞濫調。

個人陳述范文模板

個人陳述范文模板

這是一篇在致遠你教育指導下完成的個人陳述范文,該學生被以下項目同時錄?。?/p>

哥大 - Master of Science in Operations Research

佐治亞理工 - Master of Science in Quantitative and Computational Finance

南加州大學 - Master of Science in Financial Engineering

帝國理工 - Master of Science in Risk Management&Financial Engineering

伊利諾伊大學香檳分校 - Master of Science in Financial Engineering

正文

Both my parents worked at commercial banks since I was a kid. I spent much of my childhood inside banks and this experience contributed to my original interest in finance. However, my parents never forced me to follow in their footsteps and instead allowed me to follow my heart. It wasn’t until high school that I heard about George Soros. “The man who broke the Bank of England” on “Black Wednesday”, and how Soros contributed to the “1997 Asian financial crisis” when he bet on the Thai Baht. These stories fascinated me, and I began to wonder how money can make such an astonishing difference to people’s lives. These stories changed my academic goals, and I decided to major in Finance at Nanjing University to learn more. My career goal is to work in financial trading and I now major in financial engineering to learn how financial markets move and behave. Since many funds are opening in China as the Chinese stock market becomes more mature, I believed that trading will help to grow China’s economy and it is my long-term goal to be a fund manager in China one day. To achieve this goal, I wish to pursue a M.S. degree in Financial Engineering at Columbia University, especially in the concentration in Computational Finance/Trading Systems since this is just about quantitative trading. I am keen to learn more about this field, and I believe Columbia will lead me to my future career goals.    

At university, I am studying a bachelor of science majoring in financial engineering. My career is to move into trading which requires strong mathematics and computer programming skills. To achieve this, I have excelled academically in mathematics, computer programming and finance with an overall 89.2/100 GPA for 3 consecutive years. Further, I ranked 1st in my final year and was awarded the National Scholarship by the Ministry of Education. In addition, to gain the necessary programming skills to complement for future career in trading, I have taken courses in C/C++, Matlab and SAS. My efforts saw me awarded the Chen-Ning Yang Scholarship for placing in the top 0.2% of students in Nanjing University (NJU). January this year, I obtained a precious opportunity to visit the National University of Singapore (NUS) and Nanyang Technological University (NTU) in Singapore as a student leader representing all students from Nanjing. At NUS, I audited courses in financial engineering like “Quality Engineering”. This experience motivated me expand my education abroad. I felt my undergraduate degree in financial engineering at NJU was a good introduction. But I want an in-depth education that explores tools of the trade and their use in modeling financial markets as well as how to implementing algorithms to price and trade them. I believe Columbia is the program that can help to achieve this. Columbia’s courses such as “Computational Methods in Derivatives Pricing” and “Algorithmic Trading” will help me make a smooth transition into financial trading.

Professionally, I have completed internships at Citibank and KSRC Bank. These experiences have furthered my interest to build a career in finance. At KSRC, I worked in the business development division. There I analyzed companies who want to take out loans with KSRC. I performed credit analysis, financial checks, analyzed individual companies and their ability to service their debt. This experience taught me how to assess business conditions, company’s financial position and risk management. I was able to apply my knowledge in finance, to real-life business practices and this was very exciting. It gave me a taste of life in a finance careers. I realized that theoretical knowledge is far different from the skills used in real-life finance. This has further motivated me to get a further my education to gain professional skills needed in finance.

In the community, I have taken on numerous leadership roles. I believe strong leadership skills are crucial for me to run my own fund one day. As the President of the Association of Science  San Zhang’s Personal Statement - applying for the MSFE program in Columbia University  &Technology at NJU in charge of 80 students, I held 8 different activities in 2011 to help enrich the student experience at NJU. They range from technical lectures, student forums, conferences and a foreign exchange trading contest by Boston Merchant Financial (BMFN) in China. At one conference I invited 4 top NJU alumni who have furthered their education abroad at top universities - Cornell, Stanford, MIT and LSE to share their experiences. This lecture helped many students confirm their goal to study abroad and pursue their career ambitions, including me! The faculty was so appreciative of my work, that I was awarded the Outstanding Student Cadre of Jiangsu Province by Provincial Ministry of Education - 1 of 800 students at NJU.

To enhance my research skills, I participated in a 1 year innovation project. The project’s focus was to research the phenomenon of household over-indebtness in Nanjing. We started by consulting academic papers and listed 20 factors that may impact debt on families. Then we designed a relational model using linear function model to explain these factors - average ages, income, expenses etc. We designed a questionnaire with 35 questions and loaded all the data into SPSS to determinate the coefficients of the factors. The analysis showed that some factors had little impact on debt, so we eliminated them down to 4 key factors - average age, education, loan rate and income. My core strengthen was displayed when our research hit a stumbling block. We needed to design a computational experiment to simulate the overall distribution of over-debt families in any given city across China. I proposed a plan that set each of 100,000 suppositional families in a certain city as a single unit, gave them a specific strategy according to the former model with 4 factors to decide their loan amounts. We also allowed the values to fluctuate in a suitable range in a normal distribution. They all agreed with my plan and I programmed the computational experiments using Matlab. Finally we achieved a meaningful result: We established a process that could be used to simulate the distribution of over-debt families of any given city in China. This project won us the first prize of the Li Xue Cup Student Papers Contest in the School of Management and Engineering.

My long-term career goal is to work as a fund manager, later start my own fund. I believe that successful funds will help to create much wealth for clients and society. And a remarkable fund can even have the power to change a nation’s economy and lead it to be more efficient and mature. However, trading is very complicated and demands high-level quantitative and computing skills. I need a master’s degree to strengthen my FE knowledge and I believe the MSFE program suits my career and personal goals perfectly. First, Columbia University located in Manhattan in New York City, which means I may have access to many top funds and obtain a strong theoretical and a practical foundation in financial trading. Further, the broad range of electives available in various schools interests me, as I can learn much in other aspects about financial trading or running a fund myself, such as “Corporate Law”. The Financial Engineering Practitioners Seminar would also enable me to hear firsthand about what happened in the world of trading and the newest trading theories. Columbia’s reputation as the top ranked FE program and university in the US means I will be getting the best education. After Columbia, I plan to work in a fund, and later return to China. Today, China is trying to build a strong, stable and mature financial market. I think in the future, my skills, education and experience would help my nation achieve this goal. I see Columbia as my educational foundation for my future career and as a business leader in China’s fund industry.

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2021-03-24 16:00匿名用戶
這篇個人陳述范文模板寫得也太好了,難怪被那么多所大學錄??!
2021-09-01 17:11匿名用戶
這篇個人陳述范文確實值得我們學習

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